第二种类型:有形社会问题的写作步骤
可能用到的主题词:
1.资源保护(Energy and Resource Saving/reservation)
2.环境保护(Environmental protection)
3.人口增长(The growth of China's population)
4.家庭暴力(The Problem of Domestic or Family Violence)
5.社会保障系统/资金(Social security system/fund)
6.假冒伪劣产品问题(Counterfeits and unqualified products)
7.食品安全(food safety)/粮食安全(grain security
8.消费者权益保护问题(The protection of consumers rights and interests)
9.知识产权保护问题(Intellectual Property protection
10.学术票J窃(academic plagiarism)
11.节约粮食(grain conservation
有形社会问题绝对超级模式:
第一段
…方;℃一:…
The cartoon jumping into my sight is fairly compelling. As is shown in the picture above, the characters in
the middle of it are doing something thought-provoking and this will enlighten us persistently. The author's real
purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find the informative information behind it.
映入我眼帘的这幅漫画真的很有意思。如图画中所展示的那样,图画中的中心人物正在做着令人思考
的事情,这样的场景不断的在启发着我们。作者的目的不是图画本身,而是指导我们找到其背后的含义是
什么
…方;℃二:…
The cartoon jumping into my sight is fairly compelling. As is shown in the picture above, such
thought-provoking scenes abound in our daily lives and usually prevail with the ever-rapid economic
growth/social progress, which will draw our attention /enlighten us persistently. The author's real purpose is not
the fact itself, but to lead us to find what hides behind the iceberg. /Simple as the picture is, the informative
information is revealed in it. (56字)
映入我眼帘的这幅漫画真的很有意思。如图画中所展示的那样,这样令人深思的场景在我们的日常生
活中很常见,并且通常随着社会的快速发展会越来越常见,这将一直引发我们的关注/这将持续的启发我们。
作者的目的不是图画本身,而是指导我们找到其背后的含义是什么/尽管图画很简单,但是一种有启发意义
的信息却展现了出来。
第二段
超级模式延续:
充分的思考这幅图画的含义,这幅图画下面隐藏的问题将会展现出来,并一定会得到大量的关注。至
于这个问题的原因,如果数出来的话,可能是数不清的。尽管如此,我认为主要的原因还是应该归咎于这
个特定的社会和经济环境。我们国家正在努力去实现达到中等发达国家水平的目标,这就要求建立起一个
市场扮演决定作用的经济体制以带来持续的社会进步,与此同时市场经济体制的负面影响也正在凸现,诸
如欺诈,良知的缺失等等。而图画所反映的问题就是其中一个。
With our adequate exploration of the meaning of the picture, the hidden problem that lies beneath the surface
will unfold and definitely get a lot of publicity.
充分的思考这幅图画的含义,这幅图画下面隐藏的问题将会展现出来,并一定会得到大量的关注。
The reasons for this problem, if enumerated one by one, may be numerous.
至于这个问题的原因,如果一个个都列出来的话,可能是数不清的。
Nevertheless I hold that the leading causes derive from the specific social and economic circumstances.
尽管如此,我认为主要的原因应归咎于这个特定的社会和经济环境。
As we all know, our nation is expected to realize its goal of becoming a moderately prosperous country
which is required to establish a economy system where the market plays a "decisive" role to bring about sustained
social progress
我们国家正在努力去实现达到中等发达国家水平的目标,这就要求建立起一个市场扮演决定作用的经
济体制以带来持续的社会进步.
So, inevitably, the market economy system is revealing its ugly faces regretfully, among which are not only
environmental pollution but also cheating, and such problems as food safety, corruption, taking bribes,
compromising their conscience, plagiarism and the like.
与此同时市场经济体制的负面影响正在凸现,诸如欺诈,良知的缺失等等。
The problem reflected in the picture is just one of them.
而图画所反映的问题就是其中一个。
…第三段:…
超级模式必杀技!
In summary, despite of the social and environmental challenges facing us, we should have the abundant
confidence in our ability to address such problems. Firstly, it is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations
be introduced and enforced to harness and curb this urgent problem. Secondly, it is high time that the campaign
was initiated by authorities to raise people's awareness of this grim reality. In retrospection of our long history, we,
Chinese people, have, working with diligence, bravery and wisdom, created a beautiful homeland and developed a
great and dynamic culture. With our shared efforts, it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes
things of the past I firmly believe.
总的来讲,尽管我们面对着这些环境和社会的挑战,我们应该有信心去解决这样的问题。首先,引入
并执行相应的法律和法规来阻止和控制这个紧急的问题。其次,政府部门应该发起一项活动来加强人们到
这一严酷的事实的认识。回顾漫长的历史,我们中国人民,用勤劳,勇敢和智慧创造了一个美丽的家园,
培育了一种伟大的,充满活力的文化。我坚信,只要我们共同努力,这个问题迟早会解决。