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【模版例文】Complain about the Dining Service in School
January 6th , 2007 Dear Mr. President,①This letter comes to you from one of your students. ②In it, some opinions are put forward for you to think about.③As you know, students of us go to the dining-hall three times each day. ④But unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes. ⑤For one thing, the food is not nutritious as it should be. ⑥For another, the fare is a little higher than we can afford. ⑦ What's more, sometimes the staff in the dining-hall just bring us steamed bread with their bare hands and you can‘t imagine how dirty they are!
⑧Honestly speaking, some measures have been taken and things are improving there. ⑨For example, IC cards have taken the place of money in the canteen. ⑩And the attitude of the staff is also changing a little bit. ⑾But there is still much room for improvement.⑿I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solve the problems there and make it a better place our students. in my opinion, there are some complaints from both teachers and students. ⑩For one thing, students complain about the less availability of computers and slow speed of the network. ⑾ For another, some teachers worry that the much more time spent playing computer games or surfing online will lead students to ignore their studies and even do cheating instead of doing research by their own. ⑿To sum up, in spite of problems concerning the use of computer, computer is still of more merits than defects.
