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2011考研英语写作素材连载三(2)

2010-11-15 
读书人网站为您精心编排了2011考研写作素材连载系列,每一题都有很好的写作范文,希望同学们好好加以利用。

    23  短文指导

  You have got a ticket to a computer fair, but you now find that you are unable to go. Write a note to your friend, George,

  1) introducing the fair briefly;

  2) explaining why you are sending the enclosed ticket to him;

  3) and telling him briefly how to get there.

  You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

  范文译文

  Dear George,

  I’ve got a ticket for a computer fair, but now I find I’m unable to go because of some unexpected businesses. I’ve learned there are a lot of updated anti-virus programs and newly-developed models on show, and a cyber-head like you would not miss the opportunity for anything. I can’t go because I’m going to meet with an important client, so I send the enclosed ticket to you. It is very convenient for you to get there this Friday afternoon. You may go by taxi or take the No 12 bus, and you can’t miss it. Please let me know when you have received the ticket. Hope you will have a nice time.

  Sincerely yours,

  Li Ming

  (109 words)

  我有一张计算机展销会的入场券,但是突然有事去不了。展销会上有许多升级计算机放毒软件和新开发的机型。任何电脑迷都不会错过这个机会的。我要去见一个重要的客户,现在把入场券给你随信寄来。你周五下午去那里很方便,打车或乘坐12路公共汽车就可以了。收到信后告之我。祝你愉快。

  思路启迪

  段落中的各个句子必须围绕一个主题(一个内容)展开;短文中的各个层次则围绕短文的主题,从不同侧面深入阐述。

  保证句子的统一性和连贯性是组词的基本要求。句子的统一性和连贯性是相辅相成的,最简单的解释是,意思完整,主次分明,前后连贯。从语义上看,句子各部分应该是紧密联系在一起,表达一个完整的意思;从语法角度来看,正确的句子应该是结构严谨,关系一致,语序正确;从修辞角度来年,好的句子应该是中心突出,逻辑性强,准确简练。如果一个句子表达的意思不完整,主次关系不明确,逻辑关系混乱,那么这个句子的统一性和连贯性就遭到了破坏,句子就有语病,读者也就无法了解作者的本意。

  所谓一致性就是说,一段文章必须讨论一个中心思想,服务于一个目的。根据一致性的原则,文章中所有的细节都要与主题句直接有关,要有利于说明中心思想。任何与主题无关,或者说服力不强的内容,都必须舍弃,否则会使读者迷惑不解,而有损于作者意图的表达。

  应用文写作同样必须注意文章的一致性的原则。在展开时必须牢牢把握好提示的要点,才能达到写作的要求。

  24  短文指导

  You’ve learned that your friend Jimmy is ill these days. Write him a note

  1) expressing your concern;

  2) asking after his health;

  3) and giving your best wishes.

  You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

  范文译文

  Dear Jimmy,

  I’m so sorry to hear that you have been ill these days. Because recently I’m up to my ears with my preparation for the final English test, I haven’t heard anything about you until yesterday. I became very worried when I heard that you had again caught a terrible flu. So I am writing to you and would like to know how you are now. I think you should take a complete physical checkup and find out the real trouble it the illness persists. My help will be available as my aunt is a doctor. Please let me know if you need any help. Wish you good health.

  Sincerely yours,

  Li Ming

  (109 words)

  当Bob告诉我你这久生病时,我相当的难过。因为最近一直忙于英语期末考试,昨天才听说你的情况。听说你又患感冒,我很担心,随即马上给你写信问你的情况。如果病情仍不好转,我建议你去做一个体检。我婶婶是医生,可能帮上忙。请告诉我。祝你健康。

  思路启迪

  就应用文的写作而言,根据考试大纲的要求,考生所写篇章在格式与语域方面必须恰当贴切。对目标读者完全会产生预期的效果。指在书面和口头表达中根据不同的交际对象,所采用的话语方式,即正式、一般、非正式的话语等。

  考生在平时准备或考试时应该注意的重要方面有:

  一:正式语体(书卷语)、一般语体(共核)、非正式语体(口语体)在词汇层次、短语层次、句型层次和篇章层次都有区别。本书将在第四章进行简要的归纳和总结,以帮考生养成使用语言时注意所使用语言的贴切性。

  二:正式语体词的使用范围较窄,而且一般只在书面语中出现,若出现在口语中,则有讽刺、调侃或幽默的语用效果。考研英语写作部分的Part B节考生需要按照正式或共核语体写作。英语语体意义高的词汇一般都比较长,我们随后将在第四章讨论这一点。

  三:中性语体成分的使用范围比较广:既可以出现在正式语体中,也可以出现在一般介绍或叙述性语篇中,还可能出现在口语中。就这一类词汇的特点,英语的中性语体和口语、俚语等词汇一般都比较短小,尤其是后者,因为短,使用起来才方便,长了拗口。

  四:考生在写作应用文时必须判断篇章的接受者与自己的亲密程度、接受者的身份高低、交际场合的正式程度、自己作为作者的身份等。综合考虑之后,再做出文体的判断。之后在选择恰当贴切的篇章组织、句型、词汇等。这样才能达到大纲的要求,取得较好的分数。

  25  邀请信

  邀请信包括宴会、舞会、晚餐、聚会、婚礼等各种邀请信件,形式上大体分为两种:一种为正规的格式(formal correspondence),亦称请柬;一种是非正式格式(informal correspondence),即一般的邀请信。邀请信是在形式上不如请柬那样正规,但也是很考究。书写时应注意:

  邀请信一定要将邀请的时间(年、月、日、钟点)、地点、场合写清楚,不能使接信人存在任何疑虑。例如:“I’d like you and Bob to come to Luncheon next Friday.”这句话中所指的是哪个星期五并不明确,所以应加上具体日期,“I’d like you and Bob to come to luncheon next Friday, May 5th.”

  1.邀请朋友共进午餐Inviting a friend to an informal luncheon

  Dear [Zhang Ying],

  Will you come to a luncheon on [Friday, May 5th], at [twelve o’clock]?

  My niece [Mary] is visiting us and I think you will enjoy meeting her. She is a charming, very pretty girl… and very good company! [John and Jane] will be here too, and perhaps we can [give a dance] after luncheon. Do say you’ll come!

  Affectionately yours,

  Li Ming

  亲爱的[张营]:

  您能在[5月5日星期五中午12点钟]来吃午饭吗?

  我侄女[玛丽]正在我们家作客,我想您会乐于见到她的。她是个漂亮而聪明的女孩子,……同她在一起是很使人高兴的![约翰和简]也到这里来,也许在饭后我们能[开个舞会],说好,一定得来呀!

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