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2010年托福写作典型的英语句子(2)

2010-06-30 

  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a

  lot of money.

  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn

  a lot of money.

  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all

  his

  life.

  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will

  be

  unhappy all his life.

  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies

  later.

  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with

  others.

  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time

  when we finish eating without doing any washing.

  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything

  behind

  after meal.

  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

  28. What's about nonsmokers?

  改进: What about nonsmokers?

  29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

  31. I am not good at maths, but English

  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not

  mathematics but English.

  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's

  leisure time?

  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

  33.It is children who clear about their interests.

  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

  34. I agree the latter idea.

  改进: I agree with the latter idea.

  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never

  too old to learn.

  38. No one knows all the things.

  改进: No one knows everything.

  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

  43. They will learn the bad habits.

  改进: They will develop bad habits.

  44. In this continued process, people make progress.

  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up

  for deficiency.

  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make

  up

  for our shortcomings.

  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid

  unnecessary lost.

  改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid

  unnecessary loss.

  50. I felt alone.

  改进: I felt lonely.

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