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名师指导:雅思写作中考生常犯的6大错误(2)

2011-08-22 
由于TASK 2所占的分数比重是TASK 1的两倍,同时该部分A类与G类考题内容以及问题形式趋于一致,也是中国考生错误比较密集的部分,所以接下来的内容将围绕着Task 2 展开。

  在文章总字数要求不变的情况下,每个段落观点数量越多,意味着支持句的数量就可以相应地减少。如果一个段落中含有两个观点,那么每个观点句展开一个支持句就满足字数要求了,如:Charity organizations should give aid to people in the greatest need, wherever they are from, or help people in their own countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2010年1月9日A类)

  Opponents of charity organizations only giving aid domestically, however, contend the assistance should be open to people in need no matter where they are from. To start with, it is the functionality of charity organizations to render help to those who are in great need, regardless of their nationalities. Otherwise, it may be considered as going breach of the purposes they are established for. What is more, not only can international charity assistance enhance the friendship of two nations, but also help eliminate the conflicts and misunderstandings, thereby stimulating the cultural exchanges between countries. (94words)

  如果一个段落只有一个观点,在保持段落字数不变的情况下,支持句的数量就要相应地增加,如:Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A类)

  The reason that I oppose to the above view is the unfairness and inequality this proposal may conduce to. As is known to all, historic attractions are owned by all human beings and should be shared by people from all over the world equally and without discrimination. Once this proposal being implemented, an unfavorable impression of this country would be formed in no time. There is a fear that foreign travelers may never come again. Neither do their friends nor those who gain this negative information. And this will inevitably lead to a vicious circle. (95words)

  因此,在观点较少的情况下,能否将观点充分地展开成为满足字数要求的关键所在。

  其次,如何展开一个观点,关键在于是否能够灵活运用论证方式。常用的论证方式包括:解释(explanation),延伸(extension),举例(exemplification)和对比(contrast)等,如:

  A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests. (第二句为解释论证)(《剑6》Test 4)

  My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. (第二句为延伸论证) (《剑5》Test 2)

  To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(第二句为举例论证)(《剑8》Test 3)

  The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. (第二句为对比论证)(《剑5》Test 2)

  最后,提高写作速度,其关键在于“固定”。要想在那么短的时间内,在考场上高度紧张的状态下写出满足字数要求同时又非常优秀的文章来,的确是非常困难的,但是雅思考官曾讲过,考场上任何一篇优秀文章中的每一个单词都是经过精心准备的。因此,要想保证字数同时又保证质量,考前精心的准备和设计是非常必要的。如:

  固定开头段

  The late 20st century witnessed the every surging boom of advanced technology, which has brought attention to a heated debate concerning whether housework should be accomplished manually.

  The late 20st century witnessed the ever surging boom of the world population, which has brought attention to a heated debate concerning whether people should be encouraged to move into skyscrapers.

  固定常用句型

  引导观点或者解释论证

  It is a widely held perception that…

  It is a commonly shared convention that…

  举例子

  A great case in point is that…

  延伸论证

  So…that…

  对比论证

  主语+should/would/could/might + do +其他+ if +主语+did/be(were) +其他

  连接两个观点

  Not only…but also…

  注意:文章中固定下来的内容,尤其是开头段、结尾段和文中的一些固定句型,最好不要摘自比较流行的辅导参考书,避免被考官认为是抄袭或者模板。因此,考生需要自己总结或者在阅读国外期刊杂志以及相关网站原版内容的过程中不断积累,同时还要保证固定内容不能超出自身英语水平太高,否则,被考官认定是语言记忆片段的可能性较大。把固定下来的内容运用熟练,就可以有效地提高写作速度,从而满足字数要求。

  错误六:用词不恰当

  首先,考生应避免口语词汇,如a lot of可以由a substantial number of和a significant number of等词来替换;

  其次,使用正式词汇。尽可能用两个音节以上的词汇替代一个音节的词汇,如comprehend替代get和 establish替代set up。这是因为在学术类文章中,要求使用正式词汇。单音节词多属于非正式词汇,而正式词汇都属于两个音节以上的词汇,为了避免增加考生词汇记忆的负担,建议考生在选择用词时,尽可能避免单音词即可。

  以上内容的总结,目的是为了让大家了解这些错误的根源并尽可能地避免,这有利于大家取得较好的雅思写作成绩。与此同时,本文提供的一些错误解决办法对大家出国以后的论文写作也具有一定的指导意义。这也是雅思考试的科学之处,即让考生通过备考阶段,掌握留学生活中所需要的各种语言能力,如快速阅读及论文写作,从而帮助学生更好地适应海外的学术生活。

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