托福 Writing :综合写作+独立写作
谢振礼 ielts360toefl@hotmail.com
预备上场托福的考生可能对于写作单项特别感到不知所措，恐惧评分对你不利。这种顾虑是可以理解的，因为要应用英文来回答题目绝非轻而易举，尤其考虑到没有固定的答案。其实，任何写作测试的答题并没有标准答案，却是有答案标准，也就是评分标准。答案没有错或对，只有好或坏。好的答案肯定必须针对评分标准来展示你的表达能力。满分30。
梳理托福写作评分标准，建议短期提分的基本策略：摸门道，找诀窍，用方法。
摸门道：仿写范文。特别选符合评分标准的高分范文。
找诀窍：改写习作。写作工作室按评分标准批改讲评。
用方法：逻辑模板。打造个人适用的思路导图为模板。
如果你不太了解托福 1. 综合写作 2. 独立写作，请看以下的简报，其部分内容来源是托福官方网站。
英文作文品质的提升，示范六个亮点：
作文--主题的焦点，结构的组织，内容的支持。
英文--单词的适当，句型的变换，修辞的效率。
以下复习托福综合写作和独立写作的答题方式与评分标准：
1。综合写作
INTEGRATED WRITING:
First is the Integrated essay, where you will read an article and hear a lecture on the topic. The reading will begin by presenting a claim about that specific topic and will continue by presenting three reasons in support of the claim. The lecture will then cast doubt on the reading by presenting three counter-points. You have 20minutes to write your essay: read, listen and explain.
In the Integrated Writing task, you will be asked to summarize the important points in the listening passage and explain how they related to specific points in the reading passage.
This task gives you the opportunity to demonstrate your ability to show that you can communicate in writing about academic information that you have read and listened to. Typically, an effective response would be 150-225 words.
According to the official TOEFL iBT Integrated Writing Rubric, you get a top score on the integrated essay if your response "...successfully selects the important information from the lecture and coherently and accurately presents this information in relation to the relevant information presented in the reading."
"The response is well organized, and occasional language errors that are present do not result in inaccurate or imprecise presentation of content or connections."
2. 独立写作
INDEPENDENT WRITING:
Next up is the Independent essay. Typically, this is a four-paragraph (or five-paragraph) essay that asks
your opinion on a topic related to your personal, academic or professional life. You are presented with a
question which asks you to give your opinion on an issue, and you have 30 minutes to write your essay in
response. You are asked to do the task: "Use specific reasons and examples (and/or details) to support your answer." An effective answer in the Independent Writing task is typically over 300 words long.
Independent Writing Scoring Rubric:
A top-score essay largely accomplishes all of the following:
--Effectively addresses the topic and the task
--Is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplification and/or details
--Displays unity, progression and coherence
--Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors
