关于书面表达的评分标准，做如下解释：
第111题，通常情况下如果整个句子结构都在基本分1分可得，如果有类似the丢了，或with写错了等，每错一处可扣0.5分，包括标点。
第112题，一般情况下invite sb. to do sth.的结构不对，建议扣1分，时态不对建议扣0.5分。
第113题，She is sure这个部分如果be动词漏了，可以建议扣1分，形式用错了建议扣0.5 分。that后面的句子结构有错，扣1分，局部错误不影响整个结构，可以考虑扣半分。
第114题，前后两句的时态各给0.5分，短语各给0.5分，整个句子的结构以及as long as的用法给1分。最后我展示两篇同学的作文供大家参考：
(A)
First, w e should choose our friends carefully. If he has some bad habits, such as smoking, taking drugs, losing himself in playing computer games, we shouldn’t make friends with him. Second, when we are in danger, we ought to call 110 for help. The policemen can help us deal with the problems. Third, we shouldn’t eat the food which has gone bad. We may be ill after we eat unhealthy food. Last but not least, the summer holiday is coming, we’d better not swim alone in the lake. I hope everyone here can protect yourselves in your daily life. That’s all. Thank you!
这篇文章，所有要点都能较为完整的表达，而且句与句之间衔接较为自然，文中也有结尾。该同学句中还正确的使用了一句含有定语从句的复合句，较好的表现了自己的语言功底。但文中有几个小瑕疵，例如: 第二句的句意不太准确，不能绝对的说不和抽烟的交朋友。谨慎交友，不等同于拒绝交友。当然参考词汇on line不用，按往年中考要求，是不扣分的。文中还有最后一句人称前后不统一，作者把自己独身其外，而要求其他同学你们要如何如何，这是不正确的。文中的the policemen的意思是“那些警察”这是特指概念，用的也不够妥当，用the police更好。综上所述，改篇文章可以在11分左右。
(B)
First, we should be careful to choose our friends. We can’t believe people on line easily ,Second, we can call the police for help if we are in danger .Third, we are supposed to eat safely. It is necessary for us to eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. And we can’t eat food if they have gone bad . Last but not least , we ought to pay more attention to go across the road so that we won’ t get hurt . The more carefully we are, the safer we will be.
That’s all .Thank you !
该文章结构也较为完整，要点均有提到，但错误不少，如: eat food if they have gone bad的谓语have应该改为had, they改为it; pay attention to后面动词要加ing;the more carefully要改为the more careful等，因此，这篇文章可以得10.5分左右。
最后我祝福各位同学都能高质量地完成估分任务，填报好志愿，进入理想的中学。
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