GRE作文点评系列Issue 2：思路清晰和论据有力(2)
思路清晰和论据有力
An even more striking example of how expertise in diverse fields is needed to advance knowledge involves the area of astronomy and space exploration. Significant advancements in our knowledge of the solar system and the universe require increasingly keen tools for observation and measurement. Telescope technology and the measurement of celestial distances, masses, volumes, and so forth, are the domain of astrophysicists. These advances also require increasingly sophisticated means of exploration. Manned and unmanned exploratory probes are designed by mechanical, electrical, and computer engineers. And to build and enable these technologies requires the acumen and savvy of business leaders, managers, and politicians. Even diplomats might play a role——insofar as major space projects require international cooperative efforts among the world's scientists and governments. And ultimately it is our philosophers whose expertise helps provide meaning to what we learn about our universe.
确实精彩，由此段可知作者思路之清晰和论据之有力了。看来，gre作文需要的是博闻强志啊!注意这里作者用了两个非常经典的gre单词—— acumen &savvy
In sum, no area of intellectual inquiry operates in a vacuum. Because the sciences are inextricably related, to advance our knowledge in any one area we must understand the interplay among them all. Moreover, it is our non-scientists who make possible the science, and who bring meaning to what we learn from it.
虽然仍未详细地阐释最后一句话，但从总体来说，个人认为这篇比4.15号的帖好多了。起码5分!最后强调一句作文高分对策：1. 有气势的排比和并列;2.丰富的课外知识，尤其是有关科技和哲学的。
