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怎样写好雅思大作文(2)

2010-12-02 
 所以,要想成功完成大作文任务一定要把时间控制在40分钟左右,前后不超出5分钟。

  “it”可理解为前两句所呈现的这一现象。为了使文章写作方向更为明确,这里可把it 概括为:

  the wider usage of computer technology in working or studying from home

  再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

  主题词:Computer technology in working or studying from home

  限定词:positive or negative

  不容忽视的词:easily accessible and cheaper

  题目信息解构:

  (topic) positive(benefits)

  Computer technology in working or studying from home

  ↑ (causes) Negative (drawbacks)

  Easily accessible and cheaper

  对题目做出如上分析,确保撰写的文章能包含以上的信息,审题这关绝对能过。

  以上用时不超过3分钟。

  u 步骤二:列大纲(《3分钟)

  根据以上的题目解构信息,寻找关键词的下义词和衍生词,根据已有素材确定写作框架。

  如:

  Computer technology:on-line, PC, laptop, broadband

  Working from home: Fashion designer; freelancer; translator; journalist; writer; music composer,

  artists Studying from home: on-line course, the disable who are difficult to move; course in the foreign country

  Cheaper: on-line IELTS course --several hundred RMB

  Class IELTS course -- several thousand RMB

  Easily accessible : in city-- at least one PC every house

  Broadband: almost every house; school

  Net bar: almost every neighbourhood

  Outline:

  2 Introduction:

  Computer technology in home-study and home- work (topic)

  Positive development (opinion)

  2 Body:

  v Benefits of studying from home:

  Cheaper--- IELTS course (on-line /class)

  Freer--- white collar for further education in free time

  v Benefits of working from home:

  Artists(music composer/fashion designer)---- more productive

  Freelancer( translator/journalists)---- more working opportunity

  v Drawbacks:

  Lack self-control /independence( line-addicts)

  2 Conclusion: inevitable trend( with self-discipline)

   步骤三:文章撰写(30-35分钟)

  一般文章为4-5段,平均每段用时5-10分钟

  备注:朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生在大作文写作时一定要写结论段,以体现文章的完整性。

  步骤四:检查(1-2分钟)

  此时,不宜做大的修改,把笔误的部分改掉即可。

  在本篇论文中,笔者花了较多的篇幅来论述审题和列大纲,旨在引起读者对这两部分的足够重视。

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