103. mandate that do … ( wrong: mandate a to do b)
104. demand that xxx do ( wrong: demanding/demand it to )
105. wong: after when
106. comparison: like noun / as subordinate clause ( as noun is not a comparison, as subordinate clause is a comparison )
107. substitute a for b
108. their wine is priced to sell, and they do
109. equivalent/ equal ( modify uncountable); as many as ( modify countable) –
110. family in which only husband is employed
111. values are xxxx
112. accusing a doctor of malpractice
113. wrong: lack of some other doctor
114. wong: if will
115. mistake a for b
116. connection between
117. vast numbers of people
118. more than 500 people that… more than the 500 people that !!
119. dirt road cost as much twice to maintain as paved road do
120. the rate of increase is nearly twice what is was in 1970
121. account for 5% of the world’s population, usa citizens
122. child under four years of age
123. 49% of household incomes are
124. a community where xxx
125. not…but rather…
126. mere 3% of the cell’ dna
127. wrong: xxx in their performing of job
128. we see them as they were during the formation
129. keep it from doing
130. lead to
131. 5% increase in delay ( wrong: 5% more delay)
132. occurred when they were children / died in child hood (wrong: died as child)
133. xxx is in the rise of a and in the victory of b
134. one of who is blind
135. the only one of 48 states where there is … and where…
136. target at ; aim at /policy aimed at doing
137. the aim of xxx is to do
138. rules that aim to do…
139. power enabling it to withdraw from public – (wrong: power for it to withdraw…)
140. supply for campaign
141. since --- have done ; from --- to --- did
142. partly to do … partly BECause
143. spawned by … and extending for …
144. what is much more difficult to determine is …
145. the term refer to someone who is
146. doing so would xxx
147. rivalry between x and y/rivals x and y (wrong: rivalry x against y)
148. a rival b for sth
149. cost associated with a is prohibitive
150. who major in such areas as finance
151. is isolated from contact with
152. credit art with having = give credit to art for having