爱在行动老师——讲解英语短文如何仿写
——书香文苑“助友团”特别推出
校讯通第十届书香班级评选活动中，“英语达人”的评选中，有一篇代表作就是仿写。要求就是可以任意挑选一篇在英语课本或英语课外读物上看到过的英语短文，进行仿写。应“书香文苑助友团”“公主艺琳”的邀请写一篇关于英语短文如何仿写的文章。现就自己的体会，表达一下自己的观点，希望能帮到喜欢英语的孩子们。
对于初学英语的孩子们来说，英语的写作似乎有点难度。由于初学英语的孩子词汇和知识面等方面的限制，识字少，阅历浅，对写作材料和写作方法才刚刚开始积累，要他们写出有一定思想、构思新颖的文章还是有点可望而不可即的。而仿写恰恰给学生提供了有效借鉴的对象和创造的依据，及时让孩子进行模仿和创造性运用练习，从而使语言运用练习成为有源之水，有本之木。
一、仿写就要仿写基本句型，使学生充分体会汉语与英语在表达方式、句型结构及语序上的差别，逐步培养学生的英语语言意识和英语思维习惯，最终达到让学生灵活运用英语的目的。
在仿写的时候，不光是替换词，还可以替换句式，比如说你可以将肯定句改为双重否定句，还可以改为反问句，反义疑问句等等。比如，要表达喜欢什么，就有多种表达。I like reading books very much.就可以在仿写中进行变换句式：I love reading books very much. I enjoy reading books very much. I am fond of reading books very much. I am interested in reading books very much. 再如，我想去购物，就可以表达成：I want to go shopping. I would like to go shopping. I feel like going shopping.等
句式的变化，更能体现仿写者英语功底的扎实。“林蔓的天空”在仿写“At the Weekend”时，原句有这样一句话：Daming and his father went to the Great Wall at the Weekend.于是，林蔓这样仿写：My father and I went to the Foyeling Park at the Weekend.看过林蔓的文章，我这样点评：这个句子没有任何的错误，而且和原文很匹配。阿姨想说的是：这个句子也可以表达成：I went to the Foyeling Park with my father at the Weekend.原因是，文章应该是表达你的周末，所以主语以“我”为主，更精彩。所以，仿写不是抄袭，要有自己的东西要里面，变化一下句式，会更完美。
二、写作时要模仿课文的写作思路。在仿写时，除了要仿写句型、注意文体结构外，还要分析课文的写作思路。例如，游记的写作思路及内容往往是： （1）How was the weather?（2）Where did you go？ （3）What did you do？4）How was people there?（5）How did you feel?如果孩子在仿写前了解了写作思路，那么一篇精彩的游记就会展现在大家面前，而且会感觉写的很是轻松。
三、仿写，可以添加自己的元素。比如，对天气的描写，对环境的描写，而不是拘于一格，那样会更加死板。
林蔓的At the Weekend的仿写就很能放得开。原文是一段话，而林蔓就增加了开头，天气的描绘。其实对于外出旅行，开头对天气的描写，对心情的描写都是不可缺少的一部分。末尾，林蔓加上了一句总结，表达了旅行后的心情，采用了总分总的写法，使文章更加的丰富。中间对环境的描写又增添了过去进行时的几个句子，使文章更加的生动，所以这是一篇成功地仿写。
At the Weekend(仿写)
It was sunny at the weekend. How beautiful it was.
I went to the
We they walked for one hour. There were lots of people in the park. Some people were taking photos, Some people were taking photos, some people were taking a walk, some people were playing with their friends.
We took photos of trees. My father took photos of me. I took a photo of my father.
I was tired today, but I was very happy.
（原文）Daming and his father went to the Great Wall at the Weekend. It is very old and very long. They went there at ten o’clock in the morning. They went by bus to Badaling. Then they walked for one hour. There were lots of people. They took photos of the mountains. Daming took a photo of his father.
四、仿写要选择正规的英语文章，最好是课堂上学习的课本上的段落或者文段。在校讯通里，看有些孩子的仿写文章，本身就不是地道的英语，那么对于初学英语的孩子来说，真的是一种罪过。
一直到中招考试，有些学生的英语作文总不能得高分的原因就是：不能用英语思维的习惯进行写作。所以，仿写就一定要仿写地道的英语，不要随便拿来一篇文章就要仿写，这样的“破坏力”真的很大很大。
仿写是最基本、最有效的训练形式从而使写作变难为易，逐步提高孩子的书面表达能力。校讯通为孩子们提供了这么好的一个提高英语写作的方法，真的很是希望孩子们多多练笔，不为什么，就为提高自己的英语写作。孩子们，一起加油哟！
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