临近考试,很多考生对考研英语作文的复习很是茫然。在此推出“2016考研终极写作辅导”系列文章,从作文话题及各个段落的写作框架两大部分来分析,对考生在最后15天内迅速提高写作成绩有一定帮助。
本文主要内容为第二段写作。
解析:第二段为整篇作文非常重要的段落,是得失分的关键。需要考生予以高度重视。下面介绍两种行文思路——负向文章行文思路和正向文章行为思路。
一、负向文章行文思路:
负向文章行文思路主要是对话题的过渡、分析与数据/举例支撑。
A、过渡部分:
方案一:
(现实中大家热议XX话题。大家对此有不同的声音,但我…)In reality, the subject about +N/doing sth has long been a buzz in network community, the public as well as the media. Though a variety of voices can be heard,
I totally oppose that+句子/ (2005年——people turn a blind eye to their aging parents)
I cannot agree more with you .
I can not oppose more against +N/I totally agree that+ 句子/ (2001爱心: love would brighten darkness/ love would cast light to the dark and brighten it. Where love would be, it will light up gloom)
I highly recommend that we should discourage people from doing sth (97吸烟—— discourage people, especially the youth, from smoking)
I can not agree more with the point that/ ( people are easily addicted to smoking and we should discourage them from doing that.)
方案二:
(图片反映的现象在快速发展中国各地区屡见不鲜,因此,这值得所有人的关注)In fact, the phenomenon reflected/mirrored by the cartoon typically occurs in many parts/regions of China, which are developing with breakneck speed, therefore, so it merits special attention from all walks of life.
方案三:
(这种情况值得大家关注。我的意见是)This situation/problem deserves careful concern/close attention from all walks of life, especially our young generation. I want to give my voice to
encourage sb to/ support that/ advocate that (2003温室花朵——parents should not relax the discipline in their families/ think twice about how to raise their kids.)
dote on sb 溺爱
discourage sb from doing sth/ put an end to (2003温室花朵——doting on their kids/giving too much love to their kids.
)/ stop doting on their kids. /curb(限制) sth/ check(限制) sth