13849 Failure
IELTS Writing Task 2
Essay Topic: Why Do People Fail
Example Answer by Jeenn Lee Hsieh
IELTS Essay Question:
>Discuss what you believe to be the most common factors that cause people to fail in their lives? Include some suggestions about how failures can best be avoided. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience to support your opinion.
Example Writing 雅思范文写作--
讨论一般人失败的原因，并建议如何才能避免失败
Introduction--3 sentences
1. It is as difficult to explain failures as argue with success.
2. With a desire strong enough, people may pass failure on their way to success.
3. Many factors that cause them to fail can tentatively be generalized as the lack of will to plan carefully and work patiently because, without that will, failures can hardly be avoided.
Body A --6 sentences
1. Planning carefully comes nearer daring than timidity.
2. The courage to move is essential to overcome the fear to fail again and again.
3. When defeat comes, it must be taken as a signal that plans are not sound.
4. The moment avoiding failure and refusing to rebuild those planes with more care traps people on the path to success.
5. In other words, failure is not fatal but the failure to change is.
6. People win only if they are not afraid to lose, knowing very well that they may stumble because they are moving.
Body B--6 sentences
1. It can be said that failure to work persistently may amount to failure itself.
2. People with patience can accept the fact that failure does not always count.
3. More than any other factor, what causes people to fail is that after one failure they would stop trying again with new strategies.
4. Indeed, most of the failures in lives come from people who have the habit of making excuses.
5. In contrast, people succeed when they realize that patience can outlive failure and that there is no failure except in no longer trying.
6. Failure of couse has its cost, but it is the tuition to be paid for sccess.
Conclusion--3 sentences
1. Ironically, failures can best be avoided by saying nothing, doing nothing, and being nothing as a result of the want of a strong desire for success.
2. In view of this, it can be said that there are no failures, but just failures to cash in experience and find an alternative course to succeed, or at least to fail more intelligently and try again.
3. A likely explanation for failure versus success must be that, if people do not succeed yet, they had better fail in the learning posture, determined not to repeat the mistakes and to maximize benefits from what is learned in the process.
Writing Formula One--起承转合3-6-6-3句，共18句
起To begin...3 sentences
承To continue...6 sentences
转To turn...6 sentences
合To close...3 sentences
