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雅思写作范文赏析——高层职位的男女比例(1)

2013-02-03 
高层职位的男女比例

  Task 2 :

  Topic: Most high level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain % of these jobs to be reserved for women?

  You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. You should write a minimum of 250 words. You should use your own ideas﹐knowledge and experience to support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

  A: 写作段落大意:

  1、Introduction - short statement of opinion.

  2、Body paragraph (1)(2) Different reasons to support opinion. (3) Statement of opposite point of view "balances" essay.

  3、Conclusion - summarizes Body.

  B: Model Answers:

  1、Introduction / opinion

  Most of the jobs in society that are high-paying,powerful,and demand a lot of responsibility are held by men. I do not believe this situation arose because women are incapable of doing high-level work. I believe society could benefit if more women were in postions of power and therefore I think the government should reserve a percentage of these jobs for females.

  2、Why should government encourage a certain % of high level jobs for women?

  (first reason)Firstly, the problem of unfair employment distribution appears to come from social convention and not competence or true ability. At a young age most girls are not encouraged to pursue political office, business success, or professional prestige . On the other hand, boys are told to do these things. As a result, men hold the high level jobs but this does not mean they are very good at what they do. If the government set a quota for hiring women to do high level work, such as working in the government itself, then perhaps women would be more inspired to be ambitious in their life plans and contribute to a less-than perfect society.

  (second reason) Furthermore, regulations in the workplace for hiring women would not be a new thing. Although not written or made into law, there seems to be rules for who can and cannot have high-level jobs. For instance, if a man and a woman both competed for the presidency of a company or even the country, and both were equally qualified and had the same experience and background, there is little doubt who would get the job. Even more, if the man was less qualified and less experienced than the woman, the man would still probably get the job because of his sex. Therefore, to legislate a percentage of high level jobs for women would work to fight the unwritten sexist rules of the workplace.

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