Writing （60%）
1 Error Correction （20%）
Here is a small essay written by a college student， with some errors and improprieties. If you were the teacher， try to improve on the writing（Mark the errors on the words and put your corrections between the lines.）
On Pressure
In a competitive society， pressure has become an indispensable part of our daily life. But， just like a coin has two sides， pressure has both a positive side and a negative side. On the positive side， pressure can promote us forward to do high achievements. If there is no pressure， there is no motive. So pressure brings us the will-power to overcome difficulties and perfect ourselves. For example， under pressure， we will have to strive to learn as much knowledge as possible to enable us to suit the needs of the competitive society. On this sense， we can say that pressure is beneficial.
On the negative side， pressure often keeps people to a nervous state. It can lead us to emotional fluctuating. For example， we might become pessimistic， disappointed， or even sad. That is very harmful to our mental health.
Therefore， our attitudes towards pressure is the key to our control of mood and temper. In my opinion， we should keep a positive， optimistic attitude towards pressure. Otherwise， our life will be very stressful or even hopeless.
2 Essay Writing （40%）
There are two different ideas about further study ： some students think they should continue to be educated after four years at college ， while some others believe that a few years‘ working experience is necessary for any kind of further study . What do you think about these two ideas ？ Write an argumentative essay with your ideas and supporting details. （The number of words required may range between 400 and 500. Please remember to specify the total number of words at the end of your composition in the brackets.）
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