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2014年6月大学英语六级写作常见错误分析(十一)

2014-06-05 
Exercise W2  The following topic sentences are only examples. Your sentences may be different.  1.
Exercise W2
  The following topic sentences are only examples. Your sentences may be different.
  1. This is a strong topic sentence.
  2. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph
  describes what the writer does when he or she goes to the beach. A better topic sentence would be: “Whenever I have the opportunity to go to the beach, I always follow the same routine.”
  3. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph describes the various ways students can get to class. A better topic sentence would be: “For the many students who cannot afford a car, there are several alternative ways of getting to class.”
  Exercise W3
  These are only examples. Your topic sentences may be different.
  1. A dormitory room is cold and impersonal until several changes have been made to make it more inviting.
  2. American telephone books are divided into several sections.
  3. The fast-food restaurant has become popular for various reasons.
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