1. Online shopping
1) 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2) 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3) 我的建议
【解题】本文是一篇典型的现象评论文章，话题几乎是为每个学生所熟悉，但要写出高质量的文章也不容易。此种话题的写作，既不能落入常规，直接套用模式，也不也能脱离提纲的基本要求，夸夸奇谈。最重要的是要在词语表达方面能有所突破，即在如何组织语言方面出彩。
【范文】
As one of the most fashionable phenomena today, online shopping also
unavoidably arouses a great controversy in society, just likeemergence of any new things. According to a recent survey, people in favorof it are far more than those against it. Some of its negative and positiveaspects and my opinions will be offered in this essay。
When it comes to positiveaspects, it’s very convenient and time-saving compared with traditionalshopping. What you need to do is just clicking your mouse and waiting insteadof going out by foot or driving. Moreover, more choices than real store are
another attraction to customers. However, in spite of convenienceand more choices of online shopping, we cannot turn a blind eye to itsadvantages. Obviously, quality problem is its first advantage. It’s commonthat articles aren’t so good just as they are described online that customersalways buy fake commodities. What’s more, it’s troublesome and annoying formany customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with whatthey bought online。
As a college student, I like online shopping but I expected that effectivemeasures should be taken to make it better. Specifically speaking, governmentshould work out strict regulations and rules to prevent unfaithful andunlawful activities of online shopping owners. Only by this way can onlineshopping become really safe and attract an increasing number of customers。
2. Blog writing
1) 写博客的好处
2) 写博客存在的问题
3) 你的看法
【解题】随着网络的发展和广泛的应用，博客作为记录心情和生活的新方式也流行开来。学生对网络比较了解，也最乐于接触新兴事物，相信对博客也有话说。
【范文】
Blog writing, unknownseveral years ago, is a common word nowadays. People write about their lives intheir blogs on the Internet. Blog writing can give people a lot. First, it is away to relieve the stress in life by taking things out. Second, friendsmay look at the blogs, discuss the problems mentions in the blogs, and thenprovide possible solutions together and see the problems comprehensively.Third, if the people write their blogs in the language they are learning, definitelyit is an excellent way to study。
Of course, there are negative points in this new type of writing. Onthe one hand, people may write about classmates or workmates around them, andthese stories may be spread, thus influencing the relationships between peoplein reality. On the other hand, if people spend too much time and effort on blogwriting, maybe they have no chance and spirit to have face-to-facecommunications. Consequently, their ability to deal with people in life maydecrease。
For me, it is an easy thing.The most important is what people write and how people look at their blogs.People write things that they think can be shared, for example, comments onbooks or movies, feelings for the nature, academic questions. The informationcan benefit others without privacy being intruded. In the Meantime, blogwriting is only one way of communication and will never take the place offace-to-face communications. If thought of this way, blog wiring may be an enjoyableexperience to share information and opinions; but we can never neglect theface-to-face contact in real life。
