5.5分GMAT作文模板分享

前日拿到成绩单，终于得到一个彻底的满意结果---5.5，寡人不敢独自窃喜，还需于大家分享，以下是我得模板，供大家参考

ISSUE:

Recently there is a debate over whether….Different people hold different views because of their distinct background. Some people assert that…, while other people believe that….As a matter of fact, the issue of whether…is a complex and controversial one. Therefore there is not a universal answer, and whether one choice takes precedence over the other depends on specific situation. Actually the final judgment should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned, I agree that, and do not agree that. My view can be greatly substantiated by the following discussions.

In the first place, the important reason that can be presented to develop my position is that…… A good example may be found in the case that…… Under this circumstance, it is obvious that….

In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement. The reason is not so far to seek…… To illustrate, let us consider that ……Hence another equally important aspect is that……

Admittedly, it may be true that …… , in some conditions. However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that……Actually, these cases are rare and therefore are too specific and too weak to strengthen the view that….

When the advantages and disadvantages of X and Y are carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that……

To sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to generate an integral whole and thus become more convincing than any single one of them, we may be comfortable to say that……, because ……

其他段落：

通过挣钱来实现的目的：

Making money is not an end in or of itself, but rather a means of obtaining material goods and services and of attaining other important goals, such as providing securities for oneself and one’s family, lifelong learning, freedom to travel or the pursuit of hobbies.

挣钱是合理的论述：

As we all know, the first thing that any one should do on earth is to sustain the minimal material required by survivance. Without adequate profit out of investment, any individuals or organizations can not obtain the required minimal material, and therefore cannot make a living.

Furthermore, in the economic and fiercely competitive world, individuals and organizations cannot be satisfied with what they have already achieved. To survive better, they have to strive for further success, for great development, and hence for greater profit.

人的其他动机：

Human motivations are far too complex. Many of our daily decision rest on love sympathy, humanity and other things.

企业与社区的关系：

A business enters to an implied contract with the community in which it operates, under which the community permits the business to do business in it while the business implicitly promises to benefit the community rather than do harm to it.

In pursuit of profits, a business can indeed benefit the community in which it operates by ways of providing jobs, low-priced products and economic growth.

ARGUMENT:

总模板

In this argument, the author concludes that… To support his conclusion, the author points out that…. In addition, the author reasons that… Further more, he also assumes that … . At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be somehow appealing, while a close examination will reveal how groundless it is. We do not have to look very far to see the invalidity of this argument. This argument is problematic for the following reasons.