本期作文题目：
You are a regional salesman for an office equipment supplier. You are organising your schedule for visiting your existing clients next month.
Write an e-mail of 40-50 words to one of your clients:
*explaining why you would like to visit them
*proposing a time to visit
*asking them to suggest an alternative if necessary.
Sample:
Dear Mr. Shultz:
Our new catalogue is now ready. I will be in your city on 16th December and would be able to visit your office to discuss our special Winter offers with you then. Please let me know if this would be convenient or contact me to suggest an alternative.
网友作文一：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I would like to visit you to discuss about the detail price and function of our office equipment that you want to buy. So I am planning to visit you at this weekend. [1] Is it available for you? If it is not,[2] please suggest me an alternative. With best regards,
Yours sincerely,
Ellen
[1]啰嗦。如果要用定语从句，建议改为：that we offered. 后句去掉。
[2]合二为一。If that is not available for you, please suggest an alternative.
网友作文二：
To: Jim
From: Sant
Subject: Visiting Schedule
In order to talk with you on the conditions and items of the insurance policy, I attempt to visit you on 22th November. Provided that the date is unconvenient for you ,do not hesitate to suggest me the alternative days. [1]
Regards!
[1]这个过去分词出师无名，句子主体是没有主语的，这是祈使句。建议把句子补齐，把主语添上。
网友作文三：
To: Mr. Smith
From: Jenny Brown
Subject: Schedule For Visiting
I am going to visit your company next month so as to show you some samples of our products which you were very interested in last trade fair. Is 5 May suitable for you? If not, please suggest another day as soon as possible.
Well done!
网友作文四：
To:Jack
From :Emily
I ‘d like to inform you that our all products have a sales promotion next month . i will be the visit you on Dec 20th for our after service if you convenience . [1] you can tell me the effect after you used the cosmetic. [2]
Thank you .
[1]产品下个月打折，你要到客户那里去干什么？问题本身切入不具体。后半句结构错误，改为：if it is convenient for you 或者：at your convenience.
[2]背景没有看清，这是化妆品公司么？
网友作文五：
To: Tony
From: Liz
Subject: A visit
Date: 25th.Nov
For our further cooperation, I want to check your products[1]. Shall I visit you at your factory at 1st Dec? If you haven't time on that day, please tell me your convenient time. [2] Wait for your reply. Thanks for our cooperation.
[1]目的不清楚，这个工作职责好像不是销售的。 商务背景欠缺。
[2]If it is not available, please suggest me an alternative.
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