这篇作文条理清晰，语句通顺，值得推荐，尤其是过渡句的运用。
Never Too Late for Success
Most youngsters are pessimistic about their future, because they don't see any talent in any direction, but whatsoever the situation is, everyone has its own advantage in some special field.
The success is more and more important accompanying the competition is more and more severe; therefore youngsters take on so much pressure in the society. Some people think that they can't be successful just because they don't want to try for what should be said as inferiority. Life is like a chocolate box; you never know what's in it when you open it.Thinking from another side, success for one person is not always success for another, so each young person should make sure that they are striving to accomplish their life's work through avenues that they are most interested in. Every person who is successful, in the past, has had an inner drive that sustained him or her through the tough times of his or her life's work. Success will come to those who will forge out in life with an optimistic viewpoint, doing what they were created to do, and enjoying the fruit of their labor.
Every one of us has possesses a skill that is valuable. What we have to do is updating our knowledge and exploiting our idea, bringing it into effect. Now, go out and do it.
