这篇作文条理清晰，语言流利，值得推荐，尤其是过渡句的应用。
A Big Heart for Life
I will never forget that moment when I was pressing the buttons on the phone .I was entering a hot line to find out my results in the final examination of junior school. I remember having a hopeful but anxious feeling in my stomach. Kill or cure? The big moment had come. On hearing the voice say "Congratulations! You come top in the exam." I cheered up.”You make it!" I just smiled a big smile to myself. The success really encouraged me a lot.
However, god seemed to have pulled a prank on me. The most depressing just followed the most inspiring success I have achieved. No sooner had I got the good news than I was hit by a serious fever, which made me in bed for a whole week. It was really annoying at the thought of all the joys I missed. If I hadn't been ill, I could have had a good time with my old friends! I also missed the chance to enjoy a party which all my classmates took part in before we fell apart.
What I want to say in the end is that everyone has his day, while everyone must face up to some hardships and pains. Life, as it really is, is always filled with sorrow and joy. Don't get vain when you success. Don’t lose heart when meeting difficulties. Just take it easy and work hard. Life will eventually give you much in return for a big heart.
