2.=Focus (narrowing down your thesis)
3.= Signpost A + Signpost B
Body Paragraphs A 承 and B 转: 6 sentences + 6 sentences
中体承转 话分两头 分头论证 举例说明 头头是道
(Body paragraph A) 
(Body Paragraph B)
1. Topic sentence A 1. Topic sentence B
2. Supporting sentence 2. Supporting sentence
3. Supporting sentence 3. Supporting sentence
4. Supporting sentence 4. Supporting sentence
5. Supporting sentence 5. Supporting sentence
6. Supporting sentence 6. Supporting sentence
Conclusion 合: 3 sentences
指标A+B》焦点》主题
1.= Signpost A + Signpost B
2.=Focus
3.=Thesis
Example writing by Jeenn Lee Hsieh
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Essay question>
Should women have a career? Discuss both sides. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience to support your opinion.
Sample answer 18句话>起3承6转6合3
起--主妇上班有好处，也有坏处
承--好处
转--坏处
合--主妇上班有好处，也有坏处
1. For a woman with small children, whether to have a career as a bread-winner or to stay at home as a full-time mother is a personal choice.
2. Although opinions differ, every woman should be able to choose what is most important for her.
3. In either case, a number of advantages and disadvantages are obvious.
1. There are certainly some good reasons why even women with kids should be able to have a career.
2. To begin with, everybody has the right to live their lives as they want and be happy.
3. For example, if a woman wants to be a successful business-person, other people should accept this.
4. Besides, it is understandable that women who have a good job could earn enough money would feel financially independent of men.
5. As a result, they can afford to buy what they like and do not have to ask their husband or boyfriend for money.
6. In addition, because they are naturally more helpful, patient and peaceful, women are better than men at certain jobs, such as nurses, teachers or receptionists.
1. Nevertheless, it can be very difficult to combine a career and a family, and women who work much often cannot really care for their children. I
2. If they have children, they must send them to kindergarten or to their grandparents or simply hire nannies for day-care.
3. Due to this fact, some women would prefer spending their time with their children rather than going out to work.
4. It is possible that they only go working because they need the money.
5. This situation is particularly true of single mothers, or of those women whose husbands do not earn enough money.
6. Finally, worthy of mentioning is that women should not have a career because traditionally they not only must bring up children but must also cook and clean the house, among other chores.
1 In conclusion, being a career woman in the workplace or being an entirely dedicated mother at home has its own benefits and drawbacks.
2. What matters is each woman's evaluation on the actual financial and/or emotional needs.
3. For most women, both options are being rewarded, but in somewhat different ways, of course. (By Jeenn Lee Hsiehielts360toefl@hotmail.com 