谢振礼原创范文360篇,基本上不分托福写作或雅思写作。 就以大作文而言,其实只有外行人才会动脑筋去刻意区分两种国际英语测试的差异。不论备考任何一项,应该全面到处参考优质范文,吸取有用的知识和经验来充电写作的实力。
ielts360toefl@hotmail.com 发布英文范文的数量显然超过许多名师的努力。也许因为多数教师忙于培训学员, 所以无暇创作。中教如此,外教亦若是。
建议学员注意多人多样的笔法和内容,集思广益。谢振礼一人一时之言,可以视为抛砖引玉。
谢振礼应用【隐形模板】写范文。模板是死板的作文布局模式,不断习作久而久之则心眼领悟得到,肉眼却看不到模板。成功的托福作文或雅思作文必须先有成功的引言(Introduction)作为圆形心图的开头.
随着引言中主题thesis的焦点focus而发展signposts A/B,到了中体(Body Paragraph A+Body Paragraph B)则针对焦点而提出论证,支持主题。
结论(Conclusion)是引言的倒影,等于重复引言的要义,千万不要搞什么新点子,也不再论证。
Introduction: Say what you are going to say.
Body Paragraphs A/B: Say it.
Conclusion: Say what you have said.
所谓起中有合,合中有起,头尾显然必须前呼后应。
开头三句话:申论主题,集中焦点,话分两头。结尾三句话:二合为一,还原焦点,重申主题。支持主题的中体要切题(relevant),也就是要针对焦点来造句:理由+例子+细节。中体的内容绝对不可以跑题到圆圈之外。在心图里,圆心就是主题的焦点。
如果不先提出立场(position)答题也就没有文章的主题。如果不主动缩小主题的范围到可以论证的焦点(focus),很有可能冒了扩大话题的风险,因此造成内容迷路离谱,结果难免遭受考官扣分。总而言之,引言中已经从焦点里提出两个论证的指标(signpost A+signpost B)作为Topic Sentence A+Topic Sentence B),这就等于预表中体段落的去向。
中体承段A与转段B的指标句最好是写抽象而值得议论的意见‘opinion’(而不要写无需论证的事实‘fact’)。应用这个雕虫小技则比较容易从个人的知识和经验中举出specific理由+例子+细节(reasons+examples+details)。
行文回头到了结论,两头指标又二合为一,焦点还原,主题重申。全文绕个360度的圆圈逻辑:话题从何处开头也一定在原处结尾。
引言是话题的入口;结论是话题的出口。入口(申论主题)和出口(重申主题),其实是同一道门。
>谢振礼 Jeenn Lee Hsieh 雅思-托福范文 ielts360toefl@hotmail.com
14525 Playing with children
14824 Languages in use
14823 Memory and success
14522 Uneducated person as teacher
14821 Environmental protection
14820 Young criminals
14819 The importance f education
14518 Should mothers work?
14817 Hard work and determination
14516 Games are also important to adults
14815 Comparing countries by economic success
14514 Doing things for personal enjoyment
14513 Solving world's important problems
14512 Less important things in life
14511 Grades encourage students to learn
14810 Schools in 2050
14509 Buying in small shops
14808 Living standards in rural areas
14507 History classes in university.
14806 Government control on fresh water use.
14505 Understanding concepts vs. learning facts.
14804 Like father, like son; like mother, like daughter
14803 Pros and cons of globalization.
14502 Public funding for environmental protection.
14801 Creating an ideal society.
14000 Keeping A Clean Room.
13599 Are young people less dependent on their parents?
13898 Working time and economic success.
13597 Determining children's futures.
13896 Old people learn to use new technology.
13595 Business persons desire for money.
13894 Bad parenting.
13593 Freedom or security?
13592 Tough on crime.
13891 The bad influence of the internet.
13590 Keeping a pet dog.
13589 The importance of family.
13888 Re-introduction of criminals.
13587 The qualities of a boss.
13586 People are no longer friendly.
13585 Be honest with friends.
13584 A friend with a sense of humor.
13883 Selfishness and greediness.
13882 College degree.
13881 University education.
13880 Distant learning.
13579 Hard work or good luck?
13578 From childhood to adulthood.
13877 Too many college graduates.
13876 Family relations are not close.
13875 Tourism and air travel.
13574 Making quick decisions.
13873 Children using the computer.
13872 Mothers are better parents.
13871 Nuclear power for peaceful use.
13570 The influence of technology on culture.
13869 Poorism or tourism?
13868 What attracts people to fashion?
13567 External appearances.
13566 Are books more educational than movies?
13565 Students' final grades.
13864 Can natural resources sustain economic growth?
13863 A human or a computer?
13562 Following in parents' footprints.
13561 Genetic engineering.
13860 School subjects.
13559 Not possible being completely honest with friends.
13858 No free college.
13857 Protecting wildlife.
13856 People in developing countries are happier.
13855 Studying a foreign language abroad.
13854 Choosing a simple life.
13553 Raising a child in the countryside.
13552 How TV influences behaviors?
13551 Same-sex schooling.
13850 Never too old to learn
13849 Why do people fail?
13848 Changes in the 21st century.
13547 A global culture?
13846 Family planning.
13845 Children's discipline: telling right from wrong.
13844 Gender differences in employment.
13543 Different clothes do little to influence behaviors.
13542 Saving water resource.
13841 Migration beyond borders.
13540 Friends who are similar.
13839 Desire for success.
13838 Fighting Climate Change.
13537 Why are some people attracted to dangerous sports?
13836 Are famous people treated fairly by the media?
13535 Neighbors: past and present.
13534 Why do people work?
13533 Enjoying your money now.
13832 Defining 'happiness'.
13831 Narrowing the rich-poor gap.
13530 Borrowing money from a friend.
13529 Never, never give up.
13528 Why is music important?
13827 International news as school subject.
13526 Learning from movies about real life.
13525 Clothes and character.
13824 Parental influence.
13523 Movie theater and home cinema.
13822 Stimulating consumerism in economic recession.
13821 Saving money for retirement.
13520 Work-life challenges
13519 Public money for the arts.
13518 Games are important for adults.
13517 Do people buy products because others have them?
13816 Big cities have big problems.
13815 Is it important to preserve old buildings?
13814 Are animal tests for medical research necessary?
13513 Taking risks or careful planning?
13512 Good luck or hard work?
13511 Traveling with friends.
13810 Progress in the past 100 years.
13509 Characteristics of a good co-worker.
13508 How to be good parents?
13807 Tobacco is legal.
13506 Big city or countryside?
13505 Success in sports.
13804 Teaching capabilities.
13503 Does success depend on luck?
13802 Criminals are set free.
13501 Why do people remember gifts?