一原因/利弊/措施分析类
These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning ____. According to the data given by the relevant government, about _ percent of ___ (have such experiences). This phenomenon, without question, has aroused wide concern. Among the media, we can find a lot of relevant discussions.
Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned phenomenon may be summarized as fallows. First and foremost of all, ____. (Based upon a recent Internet survey, about ____ % of ____) What’s more, ______. One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________.
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that this phenomenon should be discouraged rather than encouraged. The relevant authorities should take immediate measures to put an end to this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better. (反对)
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that this phenomenon should be encouraged rather than discouraged. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.(支持)
第一段第一句替换句
Nowadays，there is a widespread concern in our society about the widening income gap.
第一段替换段
(1) As we can see from the situation, job-hopping has become a common phenomenon among the general public. According to a newspaper survey, about 55% percent of the graduates have changed their job in the first years of their employment. Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to make more than one changes. Needless to say, this trend will continue for a while in the future.
(2) These days, one of the hottest topics arousing general concern is drive after dinking. According to the data given by the relevant government, about 89% of the drivers have such experiences. Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to make a habit of it. Needless to say, this phenomenon will continue for a while in the future.
(3) These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning ____. When it comes to this issue, people’s views vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of _____, while still some others hold a negative attitude to it. From my point of view, this phenomenon is quite normal (abnormal).
第二段第一句替换句
There are many factors contributing to the above-mentioned phenomenon, but in general, they may come down to three major ones.
第二段如果写的是危害，第一句可以用下面这句：
There is no doubt that this trend/phenomenon may have some negative effects on our society.
It goes without saying that the negative effects of ____ can be seen clearly in the following aspects.
So far as I’m concerned, I believe that this trend will result in some negative consequences
第二段如果写的是好处，第一句可以用下面这句：
There is no doubt that this trend/phenomenon may have some positive effects on our society.
It goes without saying that the positive effects of ____ can be seen clearly in the following aspects.
第二段如果写的是措施,第一句可以用下面这句：
Considering the possible negative aspects of this phenomenon/trend, we should take some effective measures as follows.
第二段如果同时写利弊两个方面, 则可以用下面这个段落:
It is obvious that ____ has advantages as well as disadvantages. Generally speaking, the advantages can be listed as follows. First of all, ______makes people’s everyday life more convenient. In addition, ______ connects its users with the outside world. With a ______, people’s life will be greatly enriched. Nevertheless, it is a pity that every coin has two sides and the disadvantages of _____ can’t be ignored. To begin with, ____. To make matter worse, ______ is most likely to add to your daily expenses.
最后一段备用段落
Considering the possible negative aspects of__this trend__, we may come up with some tentative suggestions as follows. On the one hand, the authorities concerned should make relevant rules and regulations to these promises. On the other hand, the public should be educated to be more self-conscious. Only in these ways, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.(适用于最后一段强调措施的作文)
范文：
These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning the phenomenon that more and more people prefer to raise dogs in the cities. According to the data given by the relevant government, about 70 percent of the families have dogs. This phenomenon, without question, has aroused wide concern. Among the media, we can find a lot of relevant discussions.
There is no doubt that this trend may have some negative effects on our society. First and foremost of all, raising dogs may pollute the environment. We can often see dogs dropping their waste in public places when they are walked outdoors. What’s more, with too many dogs in public places, cases of dogs attacking people are not rare now. One more point that cannot be ignored is that the barking of dogs may disturb the quiet neighborhood.(第二段危害)
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that this phenomenon should be discouraged rather than encouraged. The relevant authorities should take immediate measures to put an end to this trend. Only in this way will our life and society be made better.
推荐阅读：
读书人网为您最新整理研究生考试信息，敬请查阅，预祝各位考生顺利通过！
