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IELTS Writing Task 2:
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
心图结构:
起=承+转=合
#15 教学技能
Some people say that to become a good teacher, you should acquire enough training, while others say that teaching capabilities can be developed with experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
起 a good teacher=knowledge from training + experience from practice
承 knowledge from training
转 experience from practice
合 knowledge from training+experience from practice=a good teacher
#17 运动心态
Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. Others think that success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
起 success in sports=the physical strength+the mental attitude
承 the importance of the physical strength
转 the importance of the mental attitude
合 the physical strength+the mental attitude=success in sports
#43 家务分工
Men and women employed in full-time jobs have to share evenly household chores and caring for children at home. Do you agree or disagree?
起 debate on sharing household chores and caring for children=sharing evently vs. not sharing evenly
承 reasons for necessarily sharing evenly between men and women
转 reasons for not necessarily sharing evenly between men and women
合 sharing evenly vs. not sharing evenly=debate on sharing household chores and caring for children
#7 喜庆派对
Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
起 debate on holding celebration parties=a waste of money vs. being necessary for individuals and society
承 why holding celebration parties is a waste of money
转 why it is necessary for individuals and society to give celebration parties
合 a waste of money vs. being necessary for individuals and society=debate on holding celebration parties