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名师指点:雅思写作如何一次通关(1)

2009-06-19 
本文是环雅名师于光为您讲解雅思评分规则,指导写作如何一次通关。

  总有这样的学生问我:“于老师,我应该怎样写才能得6分。”或者“7分的作文到底长的什么样?”。通过这些问题可以清晰地看出,大家在昏天黑地地准备所谓“万能模板”或是背一些所谓“大词”的时候还没有弄懂雅思写作到底如何评分的,可以这样讲,对于那些想获得写作高分(6.5、7)的学生而言,吃不透评分规则就如同撞大运,因此,本期访谈将和各位网友共同探讨如何在吃透的评分规则的基础上写作一次过关。

  7分写作的评分标准

  IELTS Task 1 Writing band descriptors

  Band Seven

  Task Achievement:

  ★ covers the requirements of the task

  ★(Academic) presents a clear overview of the main trends, differences, or stages

  ★(General Training) presents a clear purpose, with the tone consistent and appropriate

  ★ clearly presents and highlights key features/bullet points but could be more fully extended

  Coherence and Cohesion:

  ★ logically organizes information and ideas; there is a clear progression throughout

  ★ uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use

  Lexical Resource:

  ★ uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision

  ★ uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation

  ★ may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation

  Grammatical Range and Accuracy:

  ★ uses a variety of complex structures

  ★ produces frequent error-free sentences

  ★ has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors

  IELTS Task 2 Writing band descriptors(public version)

  Band Seven

  Task Achievement:

  ★ addresses all parts of the task

  ★ presents a clear position throughout the response

  ★ presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or support ideas that may lack focus

  Coherence and Cohesion:

  ★logically organizes information and ideas; presents a clear progression thought

  ★ uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use

  ★ presents a clear central topic within each paragraph

  Lexical Resource:

  ★ uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision

  ★ uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation

  ★ may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation

  Grammatical Range and Accuracy:

  ★ uses a variety of complex structures

  ★ produces frequent error-free sentences

  ★ has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make few errors

  小作文评分标准 TASK 1(中文版)

  成绩 7分

  ◆完成任务情况:

  涵盖题目要求;(留学类)清晰概括主要趋势,差别或阶段;(普通培训类)清晰表达写作目的,语气连贯、得体;清晰呈现并说明核心信息,但可以进行更加充分的扩展。

  ◆连贯与衔接:

  信息和观点组合有逻辑性;文章从头到尾有连续性;衔接手段使用合理,虽然可能有一些使用过少或过多。

  ◆词汇资源:

  词汇使用丰富、有一定的准确性和灵活性;能使用教不常见词汇,对语体和搭配有所了解;在词汇的选择、拼写和构词法上偶尔有错误。

  ◆语法结构的范围和准确性:

  使用多种复杂结构;多数语句无误;语法和标点掌握较好,但可能会犯一些错误。

  大作文评分标准 TASK 2 (中文版)

  成绩 7分

  ◆完成任务情况:

  涵盖题目要求;文章立场清晰;提出、引申、并支持主要观点,但可能有过度概括,分支观点不够紧凑。

  ◆连贯与衔接:

  信息和观点组织有逻辑性;文章从头至尾有连续性;衔接手段使用合理,虽然可能有一些使用过少或过多;每个段落都有明确的主题。

  ◆词汇资源:

  词汇使用丰富、有一定的准确性和灵活性;能使用较不常见词汇,对语体和搭配有所了解;在词汇的选择、拼写和构词法上偶尔有错误。

  ◆语法结构的范围和准确性:

  使用多种复杂结构;多数语法无误;语法和标点掌握较好,但可能会犯一些错误。

  评分标准解析及如何应对:

  TA: 两大要素

  1

  2

  词义模糊

  Obese

  Rote learning

  Mental attitude

  specialize in

  justified

  l 与背景不相关联

  Serve

  Art/science

  l 结构错误:总-分-总

  分-总

  l 没有抓住题目中关键词

  l International media have various effects on local cultures, what are good ones and bad ones?

  l people in many countries do not wear their traditional costume, some argue that they would forget their history and tradition, do you agree or disagree?

  Some people think the increasing number of sports facilities can improve public health, but others maintain it is useless, what is your opinion? 28/2

  一、点题

  二,it can serve as a basic guarantee due to the fact that people have an easy access to sports facilities.

  三,it is more beneficial to foster the atmosphere of keeping healthy for effortless glimpse of others’ taking exercises.

  

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